I see you look at me with wondrous eyes, I wonder what you see
I see joy in your eyes playing with me, I wonder what you see
I see me in your eyes, I wonder what you see
I see me through your eyes, I cry for the child I was…
Pain is what pain does
Difficult time today goes
Oh how I long for that innocence
I see in your eyes, I long to see in mine…
Once there was a child stripped of childhood
Once there was a heart stripped of love
Then there was me stripped of laughter
Today there is me, joining it together…
Pain is what pain does
Difficult time today goes
Oh how I long for innocence
I see in your eyes, I long to see in mine.
Beautiful, Shalini! ππ
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Awww thank you β€οΈ π
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This is beautiful, Shalini!
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Aww thank you…. Just some words which needed the voice
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Shalini, YOU!.. So beautiful πππ
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Aww Lili ππππ
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Heartfelt, deep and touching
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Thank you, some days I have to write them
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this is heartfelt. And sad…. You alright?
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Yes… Just some days, I have to write it out…
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Understandable. I get the blues too β i either sit and write or i turn on those slow, melancholic songs.
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This is so beautiful, Shalini! Thank you for sharing it π
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Mackie.. π
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So poignant and beautiful, Shalini! π
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Thank you Jennifer β€οΈ
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This is so beautiful, π and heartbreaking
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Thank you Laura… Some days… Sighhh π
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Lovely, Shalini!
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Thank you Jonetta π
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OMG! I can feel the emotion behind this. So beautiful (and heart-wrenching). Every time I look at my daughter I am reminded of the innocence I once had, and this poem brings all that right to the surface. Well done. You should write song lyrics. So lovely. π I sincerely hope you are doing okay, Shalini.
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Awww… Leslie you understood the words perfectly… I felt all this when I see my niece…. Children should be protected… You are really a piece of my heart π
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Shalini, this broke my heart. It’s so beautiful! If only we could remain innocent and whole forever.
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Awww… Mackeyβ€οΈ some days I am compelled to write to heal
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This is beautiful, Shalini!β€οΈ
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Thank you Amber π
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Beautiful Shalini β€
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Thank you Jodieππ
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What a wonderful poem. Melancholic, but written down it shows there is some hope for a wonderful future too. Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts with us, Shalani! Best wishes, Michael
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Lovely Shalini! Keep writing!
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Thank you so much… I write sometimes β€οΈ
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Thank you Michael… All your comments were in spam folder… π€π€
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Shalini, this is so captivating and I am totally in a blissful daze. This is like the best happening to me on a troubled day. I want to jump in joy, unmindful of the lingering cough. Because I see it from my favourite person when she sees innocence.
I am trying poetry here. Dismiss if rubbish. But I have just read something totally bliss β€οΈ
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Awww… Thank you Kurian… Just sometimes I can writeπ
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I think i donβt have to tell you Shalini that youβre a role model and a coveted friend
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I read this three times already. Beautiful. (Also, for some reason WordPress decided I wasn’t following you anymore and my comments were needing moderation. Sigghhhhhh….gotta love wordpress, sometimes.)
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Thank you darlingβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
WordPress is changing from tomorrow with new editor etc. Expect lots of glitches now…
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Can’t wait…NOT Haha β€β€
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Hehehe π π
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Now you put tears in my eyes with your sad, beautiful, powerful words. π
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Awww…. Yesterday was a bad day, before it turned worse I had to write it out…
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Iβm glad getting the words out can help some.
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This is beautiful Shalini… I should’ve known that your way with words would make you a great poet.
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Awww…. Brittany… I can’t write most days… But some days my pain needs an outlet… Otherwise I keep crying the whole day…
Thank you so much my darling. Your friendship means a lot to me π
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Writing is a really great outlet but the words don’t always come.. but I’m glad that when they do, you share them with us. They’re really beautiful and I hope you have more of those days so there are less crying days!π I’m so glad we’ve found a friendship in each other through our booksπ
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Very thought provoking words Shalini. The innocence of children is beautiful, too bad we have to grow up and face the rest of the world.
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Thank you so much β€οΈ. I agreeπ
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I am new to your blog, glad I discovered it! Beautifully written verses.
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Thank you so much.. Some times I can write… β€οΈ
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Yes, you definitely can write Shalini. We knew that already, but this is another proof that you can do it spectacularly. What a beautiful and touching poem.
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Some days I can write.. π€·ββοΈβ€οΈ
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You write beautifully… All the time!
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