Ode to the Day
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With nary a tremor
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With nary a shudder…
I can scarcely see
Hardly deep a breath be
My throat feels choked
My heart overly filled…
I cannot move mightily
My feet want to stay
My hands shake slightly
My eyes struggle to blink…
Not a moment to slip
Not a glance to close
Not a beat to miss
Not a feel to err…
Every second of every minute
Every nuance of every move
Every stroke of every word
Every line of the entire prose…
Stored in a safe place
Bottled well, held with care
A tender Touch, mind so sweet
Oh how dearly I know what I need…
Holding in my hands is my heart
Beating in it is my memory
Of the day that’s drawn to a close
Of a person who has come to choose…
Filled with colors glistening bright
Filled with love burning the night
As precious as the memory can be
A fear of slight gust can shatter it too…
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Wow, I think I have reread this five times now, (not even kidding) and I still canβt get enough of it: this is so incredibly beautiful: One word, which doesnβt even do it enough justice: WOW πβ€οΈπ
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Oh Michel… Just something I was thinking about… How goes your day, boyo? Did you have fun? πΏπΏπΏππ Hey keypad suggests these… Hahaha πππ I am guessing wear J. T pants and sleep? Or is it shower?
On a serious note, I am happy that you like it… The words were stuck since morning.. I had 6 hours of waiting and I could think then ππππππ
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haha…just something you were thinking about huh?? πππ Hihi…oh boy..not this again…well, how about both πππβ€οΈππ Or would that be just too much? πππ
I absolutely loved it: it was really beautiful.β€οΈ Haha..6 hours huh? Wow….well some things are worth the wait…..πππβ€οΈπππ
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I was waiting for 6 hours… But the words happened in the past hour How’s that??
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Haha…well, they happened, but they were totally worth it right? And I canβt believe you wrote this in six hours…you have some mad skills ππππ
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This is lovely darling!! πππππ You have a wonderful way with words! I love that I’m posting horrible drunken uncle speeches and you’re putting out this beautiful poem!! π You’re amazing. ππ
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Sometimes I can write… ππππ
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You can always write, darling. π
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Baby, are you awake?
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I am. Ha ha! Just sent you another email. πππ I could totally CRUSH a nap right now!!… And I don’t even like naps!! ππ
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Well don’t worry another 4 hours you would be done
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…. 7 hrs.
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Ooooh too long
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Another beautiful poem by the very talented Shalini! You got it, girl! Do a lot of your thoughts come to you at night? I have that problem. My best ideas come to me while I’m lying in bed trying to get my brain to shut down so I can sleep. (sigh) I wish I could write poetry, but sadly, I suck at it. I like reading yours, though. Always flows so smoothly. Well done! π
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Hey Leslie, thank you so much. The emotions were there since morning but the words were stuck.. Then suddenly they became unstuck… So I could write. I don’t know how it works… I can’t write when I want to. I write when I feel too much when I have to write… Otherwise it leaves me feeling off… This is the only way I can describe it…
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Thank you so much Leslie… Always a pleasure when I see you here ππππ
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This is stunning, Shalini! So much to ponder!
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Hey Jennifer thank you so much girl… You are a darlin
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This is beautiful, Shalini! Sent shivers down my spine.
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Omg omg omg Robbie you are saying that…. The best poet is saying that… Omg omg omg. Thank you so much β€οΈ
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Thank you, for writing such stunning poetry!
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Omg omg it is you who writes them… Mine is one-off
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Oh my goodness Shalini. You took my breath away!
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Yayyy Kim… Sometimes… It happens
I couldn’t find the words to unfinished feeling till I could… No idea how that happened
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Itβs truly beautiful my friend!π€
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Beautiful words from a beautiful lady. I do enjoy reading your poems. They always feel so genuine and such a wonderful reflection of your spirit.
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Thank you so much… This one is Raistlin0903’s fault… I mean he was the trigger. πππππ€π€ππ
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Hahahahaha π
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Beautifully penned!!
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Thank you Shaloo π
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Vivid imagery! It takes you through so many feelings while reading this. Thoughtful ink!
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Thank you so much Amitav… Where is my comment on one of your posts?
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Let me check the other folder. Kismet of Akismet!
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Hahaha.. I am no longer in spam. Akismet saw to it
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I’ve reread this a few times. You have a beautiful way with words. Wow!
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Thank you so much Suziey… Those were my dreams of yesterday… I am holding them so carefully so that they don’t disappear
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There is a time when the heart is more sensitive than not. There is a time when the air itself is unstable. There is a time when itβs best not to go out, as so much of the environment feels as if it were about to explode.
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Thank you… I understand.. But I want to go out to understand who I am and what I feel
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Beautiful words Shalini. You are quite the poet.
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Some days Carla I can… Today if I sit to write, I have vaccuum
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Happens to the best of them.
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Shaliniiii, this was lovely!!! Beautiful… and I mean it..
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Yayyyyy… Really.. You think so… You write more poems than me and you write great
Omg omg so happy
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Oh now, what I write can never be called poems. They are just plain thoughts. But this was quite a piece!!
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You are called a WRITER!!! BABES I do read your posts ππ
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Hahaha, I am flattered π
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A fabulous write up…. π
Best wishes always.
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Thank you so much… That’s very sweet of you β€οΈ
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My pleasure… Lots of good wishes..
Welcome always… β₯
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My pleasure… Lots of good wishes..
Welcome always.. β₯
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Thank you so much. Sorry reading in hindi would take me a year or more I am so slow and so bad
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No, not at all sorry. I understand and appreciate honour your way as you are. Because the way a writer write he or she reflects consciousness!! This kind of writing is written very less but it touches your soul. It’s like a communication with your own extension in a perspective of writer .
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Wow… If you have such great ideas please write in English too.. This was great
Thank you for such beautiful words of appreciation
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So nice of you.. ππ
I have been writing like this way for years… Even now my nature is much like so… exploring new dimensions, writings poetry and articles… But they are much different aspects I wrote in short here. Very few can see and feel the essence of such consciousness awakening writings…
I am very glad to know that you like it as I do…. Thank you…
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A very new part of my life journey I just posted. It’s about conciosness awakening. Some new dimension I got.
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This is gorgeous! I had to read it through a few times because, just wow! My hat is off to you, my friend.
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Omg thank you so much Didi… I am honored that you read it and liked itβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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You’re most welcome! π
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Beautiful π
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Thank you β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Great written Shalini! Deep minded thoughts painted onto the sky. Thank you, and have a nice day. Michael
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Hey Michael, sometimes my feelings come out as words
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This is is beautiful..
Loving dear.. ππ
Following you for such an amazing posts.. ππ
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That’s so sweet of you. But I write very very rarely
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Awww thankooππ
Why rarely.. You’re an amazing writer.
I think you need to write daily..
Well I don’t know might be you’re busy..
But believe me you’re amazing… β€β€π
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I write when I have feelings.. No more feelings now for a long long time
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Oh so that’s the reason..
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Yes.. From now on, no more feelings… I am tired of feeling.. Just realized tired is also a feeling. Please get your blog sorted, can’t follow you otherwise
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You’re receiving my coments in spam section?
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Yes….
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My site isn’t exiting.. I don’t why..
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I don’t know too… There is a problem somewhere
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Is it ok now?
Still spaming??
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I could follow you now
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Yeah..
Let me know if my comments are in spam section..
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No not anymore
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Thnx
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That’s so sweet of you. But I write very very rarely
I am unable to follow you, as WordPress says you don’t exist. Kindly check
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I don’t know what’s wrong with my website..
Another girl complain that I’m not reaching your website..
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I’ll resolve this..
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Thanks
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http://www.sadianoor.1999.wordpress.com
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It says does not exist again. Kindly check
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Yeah I will..
It’s not Opening with link…?
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Nooooo…
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I don’t know dear what to do..
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You have to check why your link does not open
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Ok..
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Your website isn’t linked properly. I think. Kindly check the settings
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WordPress puts your comments in spam
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Thanks for all information..
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http://www.sadianoor1999.wordpress.com
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Got it… You gave me wrong address.. Now I can follow you
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Check out this link..
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Lots of presence here. Thanks for sharing Shalini! I am a Creative Life Coach and have a poetry blog in case you have time to read? http://www.peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com and I am also on Instagram as #coachingcreatively, letβs follow each other if you use this medium? Have a good day? Sam π
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Thank you β€οΈ
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